2017.07.08 写作 Task 1 高分例文


Your recently did a home renovation. Write a letter to your friend and suggest to use your tradesman if he/she needs one. In your letter

– Tell your friend about the renovation

– Recommend your tradesman

– Explain why this is a good idea

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Sample Answer

Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you and your family well, and I am sorry I haven’t been in touch these days. This is because I was busy with renovation of the house I purchased last month.

The house is over thirty years old, so the paint on the wall has eroded. Also, the master bedroom is too spacious for me and my wife. So, we decided to call in a professional renovator, Adriano, to repaint the wall and to build a partition wall in the master bedroom. Thus, our house can be more comfortable, and I can have my own study which I have been wanting for a long time.

Adriano is very experienced in his professional field. We thought he would spend a couple of weeks on renovation, but he just finished the work in eight days. And, my wife and I are very satisfied with his work.

I guess you should also contact him for the water leakage in your basement. You have been suffering for almost one week for that matter. I believe he can fix your basement in a prompt and professional way. If your need his contact info, let me know.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes

Peter

(204 words)

*partition wall 就是内墙的意思,只起到分割空间的作用

多伦多盖尔雅思写作老师 Peter:

大家都知道要想在小作文里面拿到高分,必须要显示出很地道生词。

看到这个小作文我是欣喜若狂,因为本人在英国拿到Master之后来多伦多学的就是建筑!!!

在这篇文章里我尽量显示出了专业的词汇,但是绝对不是Jargon,是那些很贴近生活的词汇。

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